I found this poem buried within my old writings that I have stacked up in files on my computer, so I figured I would share it and do some revisions for this blog post.
Found
A nice thing,
to celebrate how
too many
hollow syllables
that, two
eyes and
two
ears, turn
into ordinary things.
Alert to the
possibilities in
ordinary unknowns.
Upon re-reading this after a long time I realized it didn't really makes sense... so I thought I should make it say something interesting, here is what I did.
Found
It's interesting
to see how
hollow syllables
can turn
into ordinary things
such as two
eyes and
two ears
which see and
hear the
possibilities in
ordinary unknowns.
I'm not sure how well it really worked over all, but trying to salvage what I could from an old poem that didn't really make sense, and make it into something useful was pretty fun I must say!
`Brian Michael Dunar
Friday, May 1, 2009
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